Our Valentine's Night

by Simon Hayes   Jan 13, 2006


Gazing at the stars above
A clear and precious night
Shooting stars dance before us
A magnificent romantic sight

I feel your skin against me
I smell your luscious lotion
I long to kiss your tender lips
I've never felt this strong emotion

A song is spinning in my head
A sweet and passionate rhyme
I give myself unto you
A little more each time

Morning soon upon us
As we replay our acts of love
My heart now finally able to breathe
I thank my valentine from above

© Simon Hayes 13/01/06

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  • 18 years ago

    by Phoebe

    Great ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Simply beautiful Simon....loved it

    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Breathtaking write SiE.......

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Well done *Bill* I mean Simon :P haha
    jk buddy. It was a very good poem, captures the beauty of Valentine's day.
    It's always good to have someone to spend it with. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    The entire piece is beautifully written, so passionate. I have to say the last stanza really stood out to me, especially the third line.
    Well done, take care~Holly

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