Comments : Death

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    I cut and shed blood
    I cut and shed tears.
    I pinched and left bruises
    I pinched and left scars.
    Outside and beyond
    lies a world of pain and mystery.

    That part explains me very well. I bet many could relate to this poem. Great job I love it

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Aww, sad and dark and very well written. expressed well.
    love Tara xxx 5/5