Comments : Could this be it?

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    Hey, I REALLY liked this poem alot, it was GREAT! Nice job I especially liked this part:
    But this time i don't pull the trigger.
    I will go out strong.
    Trudge through life,
    Even if i don't belong.
    Well nice job!

  • Hey...really ko0l p0em i l0ved iit!!! i can relate 2 what u feel n n0 that if u need s0me1 2 talk 2 im alwayz here....5/5 luv l0tz..

  • 18 years ago

    by Nil

    But hear i am, again.
    With the barrel to my head
    Thinking if i should dread.
    Even though you can't kill, something thats already dead.

    That was Amazing great job. thank you for the comment . I'll keep an eye out for your poems.