Comments : When Does it End?

  • The dotted line
    My secret serenity
    Drain out the vains
    Leaving them empty

    Loved that bit, such a sad poem about giving up, well written though, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Amazing...I love this poem. It's so very depressing. And you know that if you're feeling like this you can talk to me about it. !! and thank you...I know you are there for me : ) I'll talk to you about it in an email. Greta poem once again doll, always amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amythyst

    Short & sweet, i love that poem, very good, very relatable...5/5