Comments : You stroke my mind...

  • 14 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wow!! this poem has soooo much passion and love in it its FANTASIC! keep it up.

    sonam

  • 14 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... you've got such a great way with words. I really loved how you described the feelings that you have. Great writing hun, I hope to read more of yours soon!

  • 14 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Who is this who lives in your heart and has captured your mind??hehe..

    Very heartfelt, dear... I loved reading it... shows ur depth of love...

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 14 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Hi Bharti,How are you???Hope you are doing great.Sweet poem.Friendship is the base for every relationship in life.But only few people have the ability to differentiate friendship and love b'coz both carry similar feelings for one another...neway,take care and keep smiling....

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey thats a sweet poem....i could smeel something in it & it seems like a great news here....hope this was no imagination.

    well nicely written once again.
    take care and all the best

  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, absolutly beutifully written. You have alot of talent, don't you ever lose that. Keep up the aweseome work.

  • 14 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really nice idea, but there are places where you should really put some coma's to help it read easier, also...

    "Your truth fullness and honesty captured my mind,"

    Should either be "capture" or "has captured"