Comments : Road of Life

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Hey I'll walk with you Bill... We'd have a right laugh =D

    Great writing, yet again you impress me! So touching and so hopeful. We all get in our own way at times, you've overcome this it seems. Very well written my friend!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh Bill, this is so well written and I know this feeling all too well. This one too "Time Slipping By". The only thing I can say to that is WOW, simply amazing! Awesome writing! ;o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Bill you always write so well..SOmetimes I feel like I say just the same things to you because each poem I read is just so amazing, no matter what style or what you are writing about...I think its great when people make mistakes actually because otherwise lessons wont be learned and who knows what life would be like for that person, I am however sorry you had to go through things you had too..breaks my heart to know someone I care for had a rough life, thankfully your on the right track now..again Bill...terrfic write!! Always a fan,
    Chels

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    I wasn't sure if I should comment on this one... Bill, from the deepest of my heart, I wish to tell you something: Honestly, you write like an angel. The way you express your feelings through poetry's just wonderful... when people read your poetry, they become part of your life... thanks for sharing this one with all of us. Hugs my friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful Bill....a write that hold's so much hope.

    Love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Dang I know exactly how you feel in this poem...I think the same all the time, seems like what I am best at is making mistakes...lol Oh well, love the poem....5/5

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Bill, I love every one of your poems. Each one that you write gives out so much passion and deep feelings. I love the way you write and i hope that one day i can write just like you

    One of my favourites once again, well done
    Rosie xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Bill, I really love this write. You will never walk alone my friend! You passion for life has come out well.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    I have walked through your love poems to your .....sadness poems to your .....poems about life ....
    Each walk has taught me many things about life , love and laughter .
    Where ever your poems will walk Bill ....I will be there , my friend.
    I love this poem as I do each and every of your writes .
    You are an amazing writer and it shows within each and every word in this poem.