Hey! Wow seriously no joke, this is a wonderful poem! I definatly like your style, its really unique! You poem made me think as well, i read it like 2 times!! Awesome! Your spelling and everything are perfect! Your a great poet, keep up the awesome work! =D..
You definatly deserve 5/5!

P.S. I luv the part....
Women
In
Total
Control
Here! hehe damn straight!
~Luvz~
~Chica~
xoxo