That was too deep...just like that blade..good work!!

take care and stay strong!!

Really good, brilliant depth despite its shortness

5/5

Really good, deep and full of feeling

Nice, short and, well not sweet, but very good lol. Nice poem, with a good structure and nice lyrical flow. Well Done, nice Job!

Wow this was so amazing.. it was so sad but written so well... nice write most definetly a five out of five... take care and keep it up

sammie

I agree with Kristen, you should add onto it. It seems as though there should be more in the middle. Keep up the good work though. 5/5

Another great poem, Lol im so glad you won the contest, Cause your now in my favourites. And i absoloutly LOVE reading your work, Your very talented :P

5/5 for this one though, Like i said in the last one, It was short, But filled with alot of emotion!!

luv natalie x-x