Ok - you've got a nice little rhyming scheme going but i still think it lacks in emotion not much but a little - but its still a great poem keep up the work =)

I LOVE it. Very true for most. I guess more so for a devoted wife and mother! I have a lot of respect for you!

Love always, Poetvoices :D

You have to take time to stop and play. Otherwise, how will you be able to enjoy life? I really like this poem, though. Great job!!

Thanks cuddles