Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real you’ll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotion’s. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

No one asked the first gu that commented to write a poem....*rolls eyes*

I loved it! It seemed like you were talking TO the person, then at the end it was just about him. Pretty good, I really felt it.
Keep it up! *JussxAxNobody*

JussxAxNobody haha..lol...
but yeh back to yr poem i reli enjoyed reading that....love dia mwaz xoxo

It was very goood trust me
he will like you

Ha nice poem=/.

love Dean.

I felt your message load n clear 5/5

Kool poem...twas gooood

Nice poem, very enjoyable
thanks for commenting on my poem "Impulse", I have a new one if you have time to read/rate/comment it
-Stay strong, and keep your words truely spoken