Wow! Chilling stuff, really good too, I can really relate to that kind of disjointed thought you put across, well done!

I thought that this was a very good poem. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

I meant to say thank you for leaving your comment on one of my poems. Yours are really good!

Hi Nitin
that was reaaly nice. no doubt u have the talent to write excellent dark poems. well done. 5/5

take care
Bharti

Wow.. that was deep.. and well, dark too... Loved reading it...
Definetly a 5/5
I really wonder what inspires you??

Much Love,
Ipsita

Wow thats pretty strong n powerful dark poem but nicely penned .

Hey!!
omg, great poem. Haha very dark no doubt. I cnat say anything other than "Wow!!"
5/5
Take care

Wow! that was so powerful. brilliant writing!!!!

Embrace nightmares
love rejection
murder everywhere
lover's perfection

I think these might be the best four lines I've read in a long time... and it pains me that they're not mine... Well, no it doesn't 'cause they're yours and you deserve them ;) hell, you wrote them!

I love this poem, it's not insane.. and it's a great way of releasing!

love always,
~*TasH*~

That was insane...but i liked it!

Wow... mind blowing. The more I read your poems, the more I get speechless. How do you write such amazing poems? Can I know the secret? Excellent work. Sure deserves a 5.

Nitin,

Filled with many dark emotions, you choice of words did make the poem stand out. Good Job!

Thanks for your comment on my poem, I have learnt various poetry forms from studying books about poetry. I will write some poems in poetic forms from time to time as a challenge to myself, but most of the time will write free verse.

Keep up the good work.

Best regards,

Steve

Woah that was really deep and really good definet 5/5 Keep up the good work
xox
P.S sorry I ahven't been commenting l8ly I havent been on to much skools beign stupid and giving way to much work lol

I like it, very different but again a good different, there may be some flow issues but not major and congradulations for the contest pleacement

Nitin
Very dark and intense. Your imagery here is great. Taking the reader into your imagination.

Kiss stars
from burning moon
future dies
forever is ending soon

These lines set off the entire poem. Very scary.
Great!
Love Cindy