I really like this poem it actually made me cry everyone thought i had it all modeling poems but no one seen the true dreams in my life that were killed....very nice

Awesome! you describe so well this face that hides behind each of us.

good luck and keep writing.

Wow, i can really relate to it
keep up the great work!!!

Awesome poem & oh-so true! I know exactly how you feel about this one...

I had to return the favor to u becuz u loved my comebacks!!!
but on another note...
this was deep...it was sad and bangin all at the same time....ur poems got me beat...5/5

I'm sure you're tired of seeing me comment the usual "Awesome Poem, Can't wait to read more." But I seriously can't find fault in your poems and I seriously can't wait to read more.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

DANG! that's a really great poem too! ..ur just a really great write, period! lol..well, i hope ur alrite..n if not, i'm alwayz here to talk! take care! :) xoxo *Jo*

Wow you've done it again!! amazing!! keep it up!! comment on mine if you ever get time!! i would really like to know what you think!!

WOW... I have to say that is great. I really like it.

~hopeless~

Wow... the emotions r deep. i like it 5/5:)

I have read all your poems and i think you are an amazing writter. im sure that many have already told you that though. i just wanted to say that eventhough your poems are sad they make me feel better becuase most of the time its like your reading how i feel or who i am without evening knowing me.

WOW!! you write great. Its really funny how i can relate to this poem. Its well writen.

WOW!! you write great. Its really funny how i can relate to this poem. Its well writen.

5/5 I can relate to this so much.

I can relate to this poem tremendously(sorry if i didnt spell it right) I know wat it feels like. Again, Great job!!

Wow. why are you so good? your poems just blow me away. they all have so much meaning and passion. i hope i can write like you some day.

Beautiful poem. I especially loved this part in your poem-

"And inside her is where I dwell
This hidden girl she hides so well"

Just simply deep, meaningful, great job!