EXCELLENT JOB..WoW...Wonderful Job, excellent rhyming, Words..Rhythm....Perfect..Magnificent, i cant think of a better word....5/5 your on my fav's just great great great job
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Awesome poem....love the rhymn scheme and the intensity that grows as you read this poem. Wonderfully written. As always please keep writing an d please check out some more of my poems and i will continue to do the same.

XXLISSA