Awesome Poem. I loved it. good flow to it. keep up the good work.

~Joe~

Kate, I love the way you have all that anger and you write it out so you don't blow up. I learned that from you in a way, from Aaron J. G*********

Wow, sounds like my ex through and through! Wicked good job! Keep it up and thanx for the comment!

Aww.. keep your chin up hun! this was good, it contained so much emotion, it flowed well, and you really let your feeligns out! nice write! 5/5

Gr8 poem very well written. the flow just explains how you feel. and its awesome. keep it up 5/5

Excellent. Everyone has already said what i was going to say, lol. But they are all correct.
Awesome flow and brill message.
Keep writing
5/5
*Gem*

I say kill that guy, but hey don't listen to me i believe in the easter bunny. stinkin bunny, running around spreading mischief, laying down hidden multicolored eggs. you know some are forever lost and then they grow rotten and sick.....but i digress, what i meant is good poem

Hey Kate this is a good one. Your a good writer, Keep up the great work.Luv Ya! your best friend~Morgan~

Such a simple poem yet so true. i love the manner in which you let your emotions out in plain words. beauty is simplicity.