Wow! So touching and sad, but so beautifully done.

Beautiful writing Bill! Great poem... take care my friend... many hugs.

Bill
I'm lost for words.....Just sad....but so beautifully written....

Love ya, Ann

This is great! I love the lay out and the feel to this poem.
"Sunlight and ocean spray await me"
I love that line, amazing!

Woah..I love the beginning. captivating....Sad too.... take care
JL

Hey bill,
this is really good...i like how its set out...its soooooooo flowy..im a new writter so i dont no much about poems but i can tell this is gr8...keep going.. love blair xoxo