Comments : The Candle's Flame...

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hii darl a l0t 0f em0ti0n in this piece. a beautifully written 0ne th0ugh..t0uching

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    2years the flame shined bright and new
    water tried to put it out
    but it was to big
    and it was protected
    by the love of 2

    I love the way you wrote this, because it's so creative and I love the comparison of "water trying to put it out". Great writing once again =) xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Delanea

    I loved it!!