Hey awesome poem...i'm just wondering do u really live in south africa...cuz if u do thats awesome...anyways about ur poem i love this part
'i felt ur breath killing my dreams,, with every word they are put to rest..."

The only one thing i wanted to have,, was for u not to be smiling sad...

I loved the way you wrote that line. Hun, you've got a great way with words, so I hope you continue writing!

That was really good poem hun nice job. xoxo Rach

Wow good poem