Very expressive peice.

5/5

Wow! That is really sad. Very well done.
Take care!

"you give me less"..idk...but this struck me. I cant explain it but it was great. made me feel something once again. Lovely job.

victoria

I really loved this poem. So deep and meaningful.
'I walk along this hillside for a chance of peace that I seek.
But instead I woke up screaming at another dead- end creek.'
My favorite part. So much meaning in just two lines. I could relate so much. Looking for something and never finding an answer. Love it! 5/5

Svandyke

Amazing write i cant begain to explane how wonderful this poem is and how much i can relate to it.thank you for sharing this pain filled beautiful poem. 5/5