Great poem. I had to read it again since i liked it that much.

Hard to decipher
but i think its this that makes it good..
i liked reading it
xx

I loved this poem Kirsty. It's so sad. So many emotions, so much pain. Beautiful written as usual. It flows. Wonderful to read. I'm gonna read it over again. I'm impressed. I just wish I could give you a hug. =( I'm afraid that's not possible. Love you Kirsty, hope you are ok, hope you got it a bit of your chest writin this. Love you!! -xxx-

I felt this was a good piece of writing and that although the feelings may have been a little mixed, i felt they blended in well within each other.

Brad

This is really good
the contradiciting feelings work brilliantly
i like the two word pattern after a line
-hugs-
lovexxx.

Kristy,
Your talent for writing amazes me and far surpasses any skills I have in creating ways to express my feelings. I truelly congradulate you on such an accomplishing piece of literature. Amazing.... And the feelings you expressed in this poem, I've been there hunny.....

I love every word of it, its really touching, went to get me you know? anyway great job!-xxx-

Whew, So much emotions, how do you do this?