Omg..that was way good...btw congrats on gettin 2nd in my contest! i luvd ur poem i lost her son much! u have a gr8 gift! 5/5

~*Who Cares?*~

Great poem, Tim..
I hope all goes well for you and your family...

-Cloe

Ok i know my 2nd stanza wasnt that great wasted face him if you think about it it doesnt rhyme but i really like this series of poems so i know its not that great but i really didnt know what to put there so yeah thats about it thanx for the comments and telling me what was wrong...

The story behind it is really sad, and the oem did a really good job of showing your sadness