Wow this reminds me of my grandma kinda too... My grandma died on October 27, 2002 and it is hard to let that go cuz its been almost 5 years since the last time i saw her, and I still wanna go to her house and see her, but shes never there. So I am sorry about your grandmother. Keep on writing your poems they are GREAT!!!

I like this one sooooo much...
its real...
its you talking to her
not trying too hard to make it sound professional
and thats what makes it great<333
good job babe [=