Wow...loved it dear...never imagined kiliing to be so sweet..very nicely done.

take care and all the best

I loved this poem and it showed a lot of emotion. One problem i had was the last stanza didn't really rhyme! But it was good anyways. +

Great poem, i loved it.. well donee :)

Hey steph I really like this one. I can't wait til you put it as a song. Anyway nice job 5/5
-Vino

Wow, this poem was aswum! the emotions are so strong and you express them well! great job
luv em

The name of this poem caught my eye and I started reading. It was amazing. The title was creative, and the poem flowed really well. The ending was really good too. Keep it up!

His eyes are no windows,
But a one way mirror
...

I LOVE THIS!!

Wow i loved this line

His eyes are no windows,
But a one way mirror..

amazing line!!! it put so much effect on the poem .. i loved it once again 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*