Wow great job, once again!! very deep and beautifully written!! keep up the amazing work!! xoxo~Catalina

I really admire the idea behind this piece. Also the imagery you provoke is beautiful.
But it is a bit repititious in places. Other than that, it's truly a great piece! Take care~Holly

Wow .. that was freaking amzing i loved ever line of it it's very deep and has so much feeling keep up teh good work..

This is a deep poem with a great flow and even imagery I ENJOYED IT

Wow <3