Wow, I can definitely see why you're proud of that one. It's exceedingly powerful and moving. I love it =]

Very powerful and well written poem. I understand what your feeling and thinking. (if this is true). 5 out of 5

Yea, I can like so relate to this poem. Sometimes i think about that stuff...well yea. By the way, thanks for the comment!

~*~Elisha~*~

This poem is great. Sad, but well written and great words.

~hopeless~

I really like this one. i can definetly relate.
if you need someone to talk to im listening.