Suicide for love

by Victoria   Jan 22, 2006


There once was a girl
her parents loved her so much
she never could trust them though
they told everyone much to much

one day this girl found a guy she likes alot
they grew to love eachother an awful awful lot
she found a guy she trusted
one she cared for too
little did she know
her whole heart loved him too

a month or two later her parents threw a fit they yelled and screamed, talking to him she could just forget

she passed the days w/o him
sadder and sadder she grew
they took away the one she loved
so for them she would too

she went downstaris to the kitchen
to see what she could do
took it up to her room to see how it would be
she felt sad but remember "how much they hurt me"

her heart was broken into tiny bits
this life she wouldnt, she just couldnt live

she took a knife and slit her throat
so down to the floor she slid
taking her last moment to pray everyone\'d get on after what she did

they found her the next morning
blookd from feet to head
the letter beside her for them she wrote with pain and aching they read:

\"you took the one i loved away and for you i did too

i hope that when you read this
you see now my love for him was true
so on my grave write this so you\'ll remember what you did:

to our little girl who died for love we\'re sorry for what we did
now\' you are in heaven,
a better life you\'ll live
now we know you love hiim , and for him was why you lived\"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Only few people know how they can describe a story in a poem n u r no doubt among those , for ur this poem i have given u 5th rating..No matter this poem gives a lil wrong expression as it allows other to go extreme for their love if their love is true..But its a good talent of urs !

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is another good poem, capitalize some of the words, but they are still good, 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by emad

    Vic it's so sad. but can you imagin a tree in the middle in a desert birds come and have a rest on her branches and the leave her alone! over and over and over.....

  • 18 years ago

    by saurabh_poeticheart

    Great wrok victoria, i was off for much time so didnt post an poem and i guess coming back perfectly b reading ur poem. great work. do read mine too