Awww! This brought tears to my eyes. Melancholy beauty is portayed in every word. Touching write!

Hey darling a t0uching piece. heartfelt lines very well written. and i like the structure 0f it. thank u heaps f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Fates doesn't change love it's ppl who do.anyhow, an amazing piece that i Really had pleasure reading it.

keep it up ,
just wishes