I love this poem its really good, you have talent, i hope its not true though, but if it is you can message me if you wanna talk.

Very good keep up the good work

About what you wrote in ur profile, cutting is not something you brag about, and honestly, its not always the best solution...you think you can controll it, but sooner or later, you find that its controlling you, and even if theres nothing to live for...atleast live for your self. I cut too...so i understand. neways, to the poem, this poem was very beautiful, and well written 5/5

Wow. I could picture this in my head while reading it. You are a very good writer. I like all your stuff.
lataz x3Lucy

I have goose bumps..wow this is a good one. I would change the setup so the flow is better though, but overall I enjoted reading.
Juls