Im lovin this Poem....Awesome Awesome..One of the best i must say 5/5

Alot of my comments are way on the bottom..just wanted to let you know..so your not waiten for my comments and stuff

GREAT POEM!!!! LOVE IT HEHEH
MARADY

Hey Hey check out my 3 New poems.....There have low rating though..SO HELP A BROTHER OUT...LoL..im evil i know.....

This is so sad and I can feel your pain, nicely conveyed! I really like the message of this poem, great job!

Its so emotional and intensly written i loved it.

"My heart
unheard, my pain
uncured."

I love that line right there...great poem, definitely a 5/5, even if it was written about such a bad event...

I'm 13, and started writing a few weeks ago...I'm not sure what i want to be when i grow up, but something along the lines of psychologist, writer, or pyrotechnices (FIRE!!!) expert would be cool...and you write so much better than I do. keep up the good work