I like this conflict between the boy and girl.. its really good

It was really good.
kinda hard to follow sometimes, but good.
the last line was pretty awesome.

I enjoyed this poem a lot.
the two characters seemed real, and i felt that they both loved eachother, just not as much. gr8 poem.

I can't even express what i'm feeling. this was bloody amaing. im actually shaking, it was so good. so powerful, so creative, so passionate, so intelligent and so much more. i can't believe it. this was written wonderfully. the words flowed and were arranged brilliantly. i don't know how you did it but i'm glad you did. i'm still in a state of wonderment astonishment, i truly am. i loved it to the absolute end. i loved the first part, but this one blew it out of the water by far. so in short, to sum up my feelings towards this masterpiece...WOW! just WOW!

Brad xXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXx

P.S. you can never now say that i'm a better writer than you, because its obvious that i am not. your truly talented, i'm just lucky.

P.P.S I LOVE YOU MORE!!!

W0w great use 0f w0rds in this 0ne/. very beautifully written. t0uching heartfelt very well written. great j0b darl

l0ve always d0ra
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This was SO good :) Keep it up :)

I love how you tell stories. I really like too that you use long sentences when writing. Mine are often short...but I've got a couple like yours. Good job! Jpoet*