Sunny's right... This poem speaks volumes for your anger and hate. A really powerful poem with deep and gripping words. Great write my friend, it kept me hooked :)

You are right about the anger, but no hate. I have never hated anyone. To hate someone properly, you have to give them the same time and energy you would someone you love....I have never disliked anyone enough to give them that power over me.

Wut it iz and wut it do i thought dis poem wuz thowed keep it up gave u a 5

Oh wow! You rocked this one out with ATTITUDE! I love this poem!
From beginning to end, you had me and I liked it! Awesome poem!

Your words were so powerful and full of emotion once i started reading it i couldnt stop till the end.
Crazyness!!
Loved it.
---Love Always
---------NerdyPants

:( hope you take care of whatever is buggin yer... really sad poem.... seems really intense...

That was very powerful. and very moving. hope you are doing fine.

take care and good luck

So much anger and your descriptions are quite graphic, therefore really effective! Nice stuff.

Ummm wow!! I liked the style of this Bill....very different and good to read after reading the same stuff over and over....I actually found that last line a little humorous...Oh Boo hoo..hehe sounds a little cocky...so sorry you are angered..I bet I know what its about....hope your doing better now!
with love
Chels

Awesome poem...dont stop writing...(like you havent heard that in previous comments)
awesome talent!!!!!!!

Nice poem i rilley like it

Its really good. it reminds me of myself at a time..

Really good poem 5/5

Great ^^

Very touching.....no doubt that its a 5/5

Wow... That's kinda creepy... Very good... But creepy!

WOW this is AMAZING!! i really like this poem there is so much and it is so deep. Good Work!!!

WOW this is AMAZING!! i really like this poem there is so much and it is so deep. Good Work!!!

I really enjoy this poem. It's very powerful.