Falling out of a freindship just plain SUCKS.
pretty good. 4/5

Falling out of a freindship just plain SUCKS.
pretty good. 4/5

Sounds like you where fighting with yourself. one minute you guys where holding hands
the next minute you hate each other.
huh....:(
well there's really no technique in your writing style, so i'm guessing you whwre using the free flow fromat, so in that area i give a 4.
i'm gonna have to read more of your stuff now... haha :)
peace out,
phil

I understand exactly what you are saying.It's so hard to hate someone when @ one time you loved them so much.Good Poem.
Tisha~