Hey, thats so deep.... ( - _ - ) *sigh* i love it!

Omg, this is so sad. i loved it though. its so well written, like your words... i dont know they just fit to me... great job!

That was really good I loved the sorrow emotion in it, it was very well done hun. xox Rach

This is such a wonderful poem I love the words you used in it. it shows grea emotion!

Good job keep up the good work!

-Josiah

Amazing.. i loved that one very good.... keep it up 5/5

xox pixie

Aw its so sad but so adaptive, by adaptive i mean any one who reads it and feels bad, they can mould it to their problem and it can touch them too.
that an amazing kill to have keep it up

Very good poem, keep it up I gave u a 5/5