I Am Not Alone!

by AmAnDa NiChOlS   Jan 24, 2006


PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE ON THIS POEM. IT IS LONG BUT I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE YOU LETTING ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK:

Even though you have called it quits, I am not completely alone,
I have been aquainted with a variety of emotions who have made my head their home.

Mr Loneliness himself manipulates me all the time,
Attatching himself to my every thought, trying to gain control of my mind.

Mr Regret shows his face every now and then,
Reminding me of what we had, and speaking of what might have been.

Mr Curiosity has pushed his limit, taking things too far,
Asking me if you still care, who you are with and where you are.

However, Mr Revenge stands his ground with irresistable charm,
Suggesting I provide you with a bit of insanity and endless bodily harm.

Mr Depression sneaks in every day, armed with memories, stealing my tears,
Then when he gets his fill he will leave for the night returning the next day with Mr Compassion and Mr Fear.

Now Mr Manipulation and Mr Hope come in a pair and I dont like either one,
They keep telling me that you still love me, that there may be a chance and not to give up.

Thank goodness for Mr Common Sense, I believe he is telling the truth,
He says you are a worthless @$$hole and I can do much better than you.

Mr Patience speaks words of wisdom, reminding me that your time will come,
He says one day you will be hurt worse than you hurt me and you will will realize everything you have done

Mr Closure, here now, says its time to move on, there is nothing left of you and me,
So I am going to take that next step, despite all the pain, and whole-heartedly follow his lead.

by Amanda N Nichols

PLEASE VOTE, AND I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR YOUR COMMENTS!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tabatha

    Once again That is a very touching poem. very nice work keep up the good work, i love your poems. and thank you so much for commenting on mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Grace

    Amanda your a Very good Poem writer!! you have a wya with words aswell!! My papa the one i wrote that poem to, he died in 99, and i dont no why but i started to think about him the other night and just Blurred out my Feelings with those words!! it came from the heart and im So glad you liked it!! I no im only 12 so it sucked probly!! but it was how i felt from the heart!!! I REALLY like your poem it it was well Written!! and I like it oh so very much!! well i have ta go!! And thank you oh so very much!!
    -Grace-

  • 18 years ago

    by Crator

    Its a very original and well written poem. I like how you put your feelings into real people. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Hey i like this one lots.. i like the plot or it very diffrent and i like that.. keep up the good work 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by adrienne

    This poem sound exactly how i feel, yuo are the one who has a way with words. this poem is brillant. i look forward to reading your up and coming poems. you should write a book or something