Vows Of A Lifetime

by Amber   Jan 24, 2006


On this day I give to you,
A ring and these vows that I hope will do.
To show you my love and warm your heart,
I promise to love you like I have from the start.
You've inspired me to hope and believe,
And you've given me air when I couldn't breathe.
You helped me open my eyes, so I could even see.
You've done all these things and so much more,
And I'll keep on praying forevermore.
To Keep,
To Cherish,
To Love,
To Hold,
To Be Together,
And Grow Old.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    This Is A Good Poem.. Not Too Long.. But It Works.. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    5/5 Really excellent is what my heart speaks after these soulful words. Especially the first two lines were a perfect start to this wondeful work of yours. My favourite lines are 7-9, but I also like the end which is meaningful and still you got to the point with your elegant style of writing.

    Keep on writing such wonderful poems

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