I really liked this.I hope to read your others ones.

This was really good. I really loved these lines; "Tell me not to be strong,
That if I wait things will improve,
That things will be fine,
With these lies I cannot cope"
They were great! Keep up the great work, You're an awesome writer!

`natalie

Oh and 5/5 =] lol

Thanks for your comments i enjoy your work as well!

A very sad poem, again. This one is very unique with it's similes. Godo job again, lol.

This was truly a sad poem u can tell that many things have happened...well almost everyone knows how it feels to be in those kind of situations (some more than others) Well great poem,
i can totally relate. 5/5!