How stupid I Was
How fool Could I Be
that let you walk
far away from me

tht was the best stanza for me...i dont know y..but i really really like it...Fantastic Job ....really great job
thanx for the comment and keep up the good work 5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Thanks for the comment :) I liked this poem, some of the grammar through me off but it was lovely!!! Good work!

Nice poem.. keep it up! good luck!

Good poem

Awww! I loved it!! I felt the same way a couple weeks back! hopefully things will be okay 4 ya!! Keep writing! like your work!!

CK

Thanx for your comment :)
I like this poem...especially this part:
"Why I let you go?
Why I let you leave?
Just like the yellow leaves
scattered to the autumn's winds

How stupid I Was
How fool Could I Be
that let you walk
far away from me"
you did a great job ;)