~*WoW been a really long time since i've read ur work really glad ur writing again well keep it up n i can kinda relate to this one 5/5*~xoxo

Great message, choices you make today shape your world tomorrow.

This poems looks pretty good. and i really understand what you're trying to say. keep ur head up and peace out!

This was really fantastic. Perhaps try arranging it so each clause is on one line and it take on more a poems format...makes it a bit easier to read and makes the rhyme more compelling. Still nicely done...

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Wow this is really good. very thought provoking about where you would be if you had of done something different. This is something probably everyone can relate to. Great job! 5/5**

I can relate to this one. i think thats why i like it so much. great job. you have a way with words. its a great poem. and thank you for the comments

I love this poem.Very well written.