This is so incredible! It reminds me of the day I graduated from high school.My best friend's name is Ashley. I admit I miss her like crazy. This brilliantly written!

Bravo....starts clapping slowly* you did a great job on this one. it flowed and was able to keep on topic which for some writters i found it was hard to do for them. good job. i'll give you a five and i think that was one of the best poems i've read on here. sure i never really read anyones poems but blah oh well. thanks for the comment on my april first was the worst poem. yeah i just thought of that line yesterday and thought what the hell i should make it into something usefull. your poem reminds me of a few old ones i did a while ago. anyways 5 c ya.

It's really awesome and amazing. it came from the bottom of your heart well done, i like it very much. try to be strong and if you need any help e-mail me