Hey, I just wanted to say thanks for your comment on my poems, I really enjoyed and appreciated them - and here I am to return the favour just as I should. This poem is really sad, and I love how you gave your character a name, I have never been able to pull that off without having it sound like I tried too hard lol, but you did it and made itlook easy. You also had a good rhyme scheme that was rather easy to follow. Great job!

Hey this poem is v. heartfelt. im sorry if its true. thnx 4 ur comment. xxxxx

I agree with "lonelnow" this really is a heartfelt poem and sadlly its a reflection of society and how someone has to die for people to listen