HER FiRST MiSTAKE...

by NewAccount   Jan 25, 2006


THERE`S THiS GUY WHO SHE`S CRAZii ABOUT,
THEY WOULD BE TOGETHER;;SHE HAD NO DOUBT.
SHE DECiDED TO GiVE HiM HER HEART,
WELL i GUESS SHE WAS WRONG FROM THE START.

" i LOVE YOU " SHE DiD FiNALLY CONFESS,
LOUDLY HE LAUGHED " GiRL YOU`RE A MESS "
" YOU`RE NOT PRETTY " HE CONTiNUED TO DiSS,
DiD HE EVER THiNK SHE WOULD SLiT HER WRiSTS?

THAT DAY SHE SLOWLY WALKED HOME,
THEN UP TO HER ROOM WHERE SHE COULD BE ALONE.
SHE LOOKED iN THE MiRROR AS SHE BEGAN TO CRY,
" i`M NOT GOOD ENOUGH " SHE SAiD-WANTiNG TO DiE.

SHE TOOK ONE LAST LOOK AT THE REFLECTiON,
REALiZiNG-SUDDENLY-ALL THE iMPERFECTiONS.
SHE HiT THE MiRROR FULL FORCE WiTH HER FiST,
SHE GRABBED A SHARD;GLADLY CARViNG HER WRiST.

FiRST CAME MARKS-BUT THEN CAME HiS NAME,
SHE SHOWED HiM THE SCARS;;HOPiNG TO DRiVE HiM iNSANE.
SHE TURNED ON THE FAUCET && FiLLED THE BATH WiTH WATER,
SHE WONDERED WHAT HAPPENED TO MOMMY`S PERFECT DAUGHTER.

HER PARENTS CAME HOME HAPPY AS COULD BE,
UNTiL THEY FOUND HER AT THE BOTTOM OF HER OWN RED SEA.
THEY HAD NO iDEA-THEY`RE LOST AND CONFUSED,
THEY DiDN`T KNOW ALL THE BLOOD SHE USED.

BUT THE NOTE WAS THE FiNAL TOUCH,
WRiTTEN iN BLOOD " NOW AM i PRETTY ENOUGH? "
HER FACE WAS BROKEN--UGLY AND SCARRED--
SHE RUiNED HER WRiSTS AND FACE WHEN LiFE BECAME TOO HARD.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loruhh

    Its such a true poem
    Some peopel choose death if they cant have what they want...if they choose death then yeah, they must of REALLY been in love!!

    I hope this doesnt happen often =[ its sad

    makes me wonder how the guy would feel that made her do this!!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by writersxblock

    Aw thats amazing.. wow. Hey whered the idea cum from? ur a fave of myne! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    IT IS GOOD! SO POWERFUL!

    x3----SHELBY

  • 18 years ago

    by hurtincuzofhim

    Wow...that was great....dont eva do that tho....no guy is worth it....cuz guys can be total jerks...no offense 2 the nice ones lol...anyways keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    I really liked this poem.
    It shows how much hurt guys can cause.
    Keep up the great work.
    Hope to see more great poems.
    Emma x