***I loved this poem...it was full of hurt yet there was strength in it too...a beautiful poem! Keep Writing!***
PS Thanks for commenting on my poem!

Another great poem loved it............

xoxo
allana

p.s just one thing you spelt throat troat but know worries its still a good poem :)

May i have a razor blade kiss.It only makes the pain more intense yet this is my defense

^my favorite stanza.Very good!

<3Amber

Okayy, first of all I want to say I liked your use of words. Your grammar was not very good, though. I'd go back and proof read and correct all of the mistakes.

I'm so sad and it hurts real bad it was like a knife cutting my troat and pushing in too deep.
^^Troat should be throat.

Cayce xx