Wow.. No really i mean WOW!! I loved this poem, It rhymed perfectly and i loved the descriptive words you used!
Keep up the excellent work. 5/5
Bec xx

Hey this is really good... comment on my poem.. the newest one

Wonderful! you have real talent!!!
a few small grammar errors, but the poem flowed perfectly, and the images were great! well done!!

Ruby

Very emotionally piece... keep up the good work =) Loving your poems. 5/5.

--James~

Ummm... if you need to talk about stuff yeah stuff i am free i have benn threw all the junk and stopped..... i liked the poem..but try to remeber to put in there that its triggering
-Allie

Very nice. the metaphor crimson tears is exellent. very lovely and sad. great writing

Ruby

Very nice. the metaphor crimson tears is exellent. very lovely and sad. great writing

Ruby

Amazing once again very deep and touching! so sad the opic though remember there is always someone who does notice you and who does care even if you havent noticed them xx ALLY xx well done1

Great job!!!

Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

LOVE
Micky

This poem is soo sad, but fantastic keep writing and take care hun sarah x

This poem speaks alot of feelings i have myself. well done