Comments : Night's Wave

  • Nicely done. i like this one. some great word play in this piece. i particularly like the line:

    "...Slipping back into the desolate calm..."

    beautiful imagery. very well done. keep it up. -hannah

  • 15 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very strong imergry and overall a fantastic eice


  • 15 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Excellnt poem..nice rhythm and suggestion would be that you could of done this poem in the Nature Category..5/5 great job
    ttyl sometime
    ~The Poet~

  • 14 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really enjoyed this poem. I love the imagery in nature poems, you did an excelent job in it. I liked your description in this, "glitering sand" creates this really cool imagery of a ceach and the glittering is glass and stuff like that. I liked how you described the sun as dying, this is a different way to describe how night is coming and the sun is setting. You really captured that beautiful image of the sun setting. An excellent job. To impr9ove i suggest you useo unctuation. Other then that a great read! Keep writing! xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    =D loved it!
    well done an amazing poem!
    keep up the hard work!


  • 14 years ago

    by Nix

    I really like this one, it is short but still very powerful, you created effective atmosphere with just a few words and rhythm of this piece is great. Well done!