A beautifully flowing poem, this is one of my favourites. It's hard to let someone in without thinking about the consequences and the possibility of being hurt again. A wonderful write. Well done my friend

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Hey! long time since i read one of ur poems, they're still freakishly brilliant : )
hope to hear more from you.
Suzie

Well done really good loved it!!! its was so stronge keep it up

Wow i ussually dont like the next line rhyming system but this is really good...great job....

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Once again, I am blown away by a wonderful piece of work. I really enjoy the rhymes, it's nice to see, every once and a while, rhymes that aren't forced and that go together well, I know it is hard to rhyme but for those people who have trouble rhyming, a poem doesn't have to rhyme... Anyways, your rhymes were perfect, the rhyming scheme was awesome.

There is one set of rhymes, if they are, that I found though, so I finally get to help you,

wrongs and strong,

yes they rhyme but wrongs ends in an s, it sort of takes away from the rhyme.

Please keep up the good work, and this is a really good ending:

This fantasy, though, it isn't real,
Self-inflicted pain is all I feel.
If I let you in, you'd turn on me,
Make me hate both you and me,
I feel confusion tearing me apart,
I wanted you to see me from the start,
But lonely and invisible I will stay,
If you don't see me that way...

Thank you for sharing this poem,

I really have a lot to think about now.

Wow! Great poem! The feelings are extremely strong. Sorry I haven't talked to you in so long. Shoot me an email if you have time.

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This is me without the self-inflicted pain part. Incedible poem! I love the conflict of the heart and brain. The heart wants to let him in. The brain says he'll hurt you. It's awesome.

Great poem, content was good, but not a fan of that rhyme pattern, but again a great poem.

Brilliantly written. it flows very well and the content is fantastic.

5/5