Hi Nitin

i just loved this one. u write dark poems but i found this 1 something different.

excellent!!!! 5/5

take care

Bharti

The lonliness really comes out in this one. I really like the line "I see so many of me growing around". Great job.

Great poem i really loved it!!!!

Wow... Ok, so this is where you r spending all your time... writing dark poems...

I loved it all the way through...
love melting in pain... nice work...

Much Love,
Ipsita

Omg, the pain and loneliness felt in this poem is amazing.. WOW.
well, this is different from your other poems. good job
Monique

'as my tears
touch ground
i see so many of me
growing around'

Wow... amazing lines yaar. Absolutely breath taking. Your poems always leave me speechless and I forget my adjectives. lol.... anyways, excellent work once again. I dont know what else to say, I truely am speechless.

By the way, you're not alone there in the barren land, if you look closely, you will see me there. :-)

Love and best wishes always
Michelle

Great one Nithin. so sad and so powerful.

great work, good luck and keep writing

shobhana

Nitin
Excellent job on this sad piece you have penned. The loneliness and sadness cry from your words.

right in the middle of barren land
alone with my tears i stand
thinking of the time i had

You are not alone yaar I am always here for you.
Love Cindy