Hey i realy lyk this poem... sumtymes tha flow is confusing but it adds to it so dont change it.. itz really good!!!

Wow i realy love tis theres so much emotion in it .... i think your a great poem writer wish you the best of lu x jo x

I know that this poem is a bit confusing but isn't that what love is most of the time....

Wow thats really good, u've got alot of talent and i wish i could write half as good as u that would be already enuff, great work

Really good
alot of emotion put into it
i love it
keep up the great work

--binkz--

I loved it levi a lot of emotion and thought put into it. very well written.
take care
Aimee

Hey great job keep it up! i loved it!!

DA
or Kristie

I feel exactly the same, Good stuff.

I really like this poem alot of emotion in it u hav a gift dnt stop writeing