I LUV IT!!! i absoloutly love it.its gr8. keep it up :):):):)

Forver ago you commented on mine and asked me to do the same. never had a chance to till now- but im glad i did. excellent write

This is a very well written poem!

WOW this one I am speechless on I keep rereading it. it is so good I really liked this one. KeEp Up ThE gReAt WoRk!!! luv kal

Wooooooooo this is nice thanks for reading one of my poems

OH WOW REALLY WELL WRITTEN POEM!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK OK!!!

Its nicely written, but i find it slightly morbid. have you tried writing about happy things?