Beautifully conveyed! The entire piece is brilliant.
I just love the last three stanza's, such perfection. Oh and the ending, WOW!
Great stuff!
Now hurry up and post more, no pressure of course :)
Love ya~Holly

Danng...You are a Truly Amazing Poet...You got some major talent and you even have the awards to show it...Excellent job...Magnificent...
ttyl sometime
5/5
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Good poem 5/5 love crazy xoxox

Tim,

This is a very touching and emotional piece of writing, the flow was exceptional throughout the entire piece. well done!

Best regards,

Steve

How deep, touching and heartfelt...and what a powerful ending:

"People say that time heals all wounds
I will never believe that phrase again
Time took your heart away too soon
And left me with just a friend."

Amazing write! immensely enjoyed. keep up the good work!

Great poem! It starts and ends so well! Terrific job!

Truely breath taking poem...I loved it T. Your words amaze me everytime...and Im blown away by your talent.

Lis **