Comments : One last time

  • 14 years ago

    by Leah

    Awe...thats a really cute poem. makes me feel happy inside! im new on here and im trying to find someone on here who kinda has the same idea i do in writing poety. i hope you can read a few of my poems and we can become friends. hope to talk to you soon

  • 14 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Yet Another Wonderful Poem Your Wrote! Danm You Write So Goood! Hope To Read More Of You're Poemz Soon!
    5/5

    Luv,
    *LuvYou2Death*

  • 14 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Liked this poem as well but I think you need to fix some things.

    "to feel all rejoice." I'm not sure why but something don't sound write when you say it and the other thing is

    "but now my hearts in two." sounded fine but didn't becuase you can't have two hearts maybe you should say: but now my heart is in two

  • 14 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Another AMAZING AMAZING poem. loved it!

    TaKe CaRe,,

    LoTa LoVeN,,

    T!FF@N!

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle

    Great poem... sounds like me, what I did to my last love... but, now we are back together. Thank goodness. It was a mess WITHOUT him!

    Michelle

  • 14 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent work again... ! i love ur poems...i love sad poems... i added u to my favs last time.. i'll make sure i read more soon...
    love
    amy

  • 14 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Wow..i can leave myself comments!!! how cool is that!!!