Comments : Life

  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa

    Beautifully written, but so sad! I know this pain and I could feel your every word, great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully written...wonderful sentiments. We all can make a difference, each day.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Such an emotional piece....beautifully written...

    love ya, Ann

  • 14 years ago

    by Ken

    Great job i luv your work so much

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written gessele. that was really g0od. a heartfelt piece. gret j0b keep it up!

    l0ve always d0ra
    [x00o00x]

  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa

    Gesselle, "Beauty & Grace" is beautifully written, I especially loved the last stanza! So sweetly written! Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Gesselle,

    Very profound and deep thoughts, I guess we all have the same questions at one time or another. Splendid write.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 14 years ago

    by sexicowwss

    Thats so deep and true i loved it the ryhming the meaning lordai~!
    i understand don't worry i've been through that and its still kinda there but you just have to be strong and kick the arses of whoever blocks your way . brave up !~ its gonna be alll GOOD !~

    believe me =]

  • 14 years ago

    by Darien

    You are talented. I really liked this poem. Holds a lot of meaning for me.

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Well if some ppl carry the same thoughts of yours world would have been a more pleasant one. i love ure thoughts and agree with what you say but we may the encounter opposite of things to feel their value. fear makes us admire safety , pain health.......ect.good piece.

    all da best

  • 14 years ago

    by Jay27

    Its been some time since you wrote this, I can only hope you've managed to answer a few of your own questions.

    take care beautiful,

    Jay

  • 14 years ago

    by StMario

    I am an agreeable friend on that one. I continue to pray for world peace. If it never happen here on this planet I know it will In Heaven.. I have a poem titled " when we get to heaven" check it out" it may or may not help with inner peace... knowing a change is gonna come... Good work.. love the poetry....

  • 14 years ago

    by chris

    Hey i love this poem as with all of your stuff, but the cry for good is just wonderful, the battles that everyone struggles with, most of which want there to just be love and good things, but cant escape their struggles. there is a hope though with this generation of people to make that change, it is something i see heavily embedded in this generation. to make a change. to make things better. all of us still full with hope. dont lose that. take care my friend