by Melissa
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Beautifully written, but so sad! I know this pain and I could feel your every word, great job! |
by Bill Turner
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Beautifully written...wonderful sentiments. We all can make a difference, each day. |
by Ann Stareyes
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Such an emotional piece....beautifully written... |
by Ken
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Great job i luv your work so much |
by dora
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Beautifully written gessele. that was really g0od. a heartfelt piece. gret j0b keep it up! |
by Melissa
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Gesselle, "Beauty & Grace" is beautifully written, I especially loved the last stanza! So sweetly written! Great job! |
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Gesselle, |
by sexicowwss
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Thats so deep and true i loved it the ryhming the meaning lordai~! |
by Darien
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You are talented. I really liked this poem. Holds a lot of meaning for me. |
by Just Wishes
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Well if some ppl carry the same thoughts of yours world would have been a more pleasant one. i love ure thoughts and agree with what you say but we may the encounter opposite of things to feel their value. fear makes us admire safety , pain health.......ect.good piece. |
by Jay27
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Its been some time since you wrote this, I can only hope you've managed to answer a few of your own questions. |
by StMario
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I am an agreeable friend on that one. I continue to pray for world peace. If it never happen here on this planet I know it will In Heaven.. I have a poem titled " when we get to heaven" check it out" it may or may not help with inner peace... knowing a change is gonna come... Good work.. love the poetry.... |
by chris
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Hey i love this poem as with all of your stuff, but the cry for good is just wonderful, the battles that everyone struggles with, most of which want there to just be love and good things, but cant escape their struggles. there is a hope though with this generation of people to make that change, it is something i see heavily embedded in this generation. to make a change. to make things better. all of us still full with hope. dont lose that. take care my friend |